英語是通向國(guó)外的橋梁，下學(xué)期就要成為高三學(xué)子的你，是否還在為自己的英語作文而煩惱呢?高考英語作文是英語中拉分與提高分?jǐn)?shù)的重要一城，必須做到不容有失，以下是學(xué)習(xí)啦網(wǎng)小編為你準(zhǔn)備的高考英語作文賞析——Green Action in Our Class(附點(diǎn)評(píng))

　　【北京卷】

　　【試題回放】情景作文

　　假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國(guó)的號(hào)召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動(dòng)的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動(dòng)”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。

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　　提示詞：郊區(qū)suburbs

　　April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點(diǎn)連貫，在語言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達(dá)。