英語作文，是指用英語針對某一內(nèi)容寫出一篇文章;是英語考試最常見的一種題目類型。今天學(xué)習(xí)啦小編要與大家分享的是：高考英語滿分作文《Green Action in Our Class》范文。具體內(nèi)容如下:

　　【試題回放】

　　情景作文

　　假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國的號召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹，請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹活動的全過程，給某英文雜志的“綠色行動”專欄寫一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”為題的英文稿件。

　　注意：詞數(shù)不少于60

　　提示詞：郊區(qū)suburbs

　　【滿分作文】

Green Action in Our Class

　　April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

　　【名師點評】

　　本文是設(shè)計巧妙的提綱要點式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點連貫，在語言的表達上選詞新穎，同時運用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達。

　　【閱卷老師點評】

　　亮點1：正確使用原因狀語從句，如“…because our class had a meanineful experience on thatday.”。

　　亮點2：正確使用了難度較大的介詞短語，如upon arrival，after getting the work done，beforeleaving等，把時間概念交代得十分清楚。

　　亮點3：正確使用并列句式，如“Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and plantingyoung trees. Others were watering them.”句意豐富，富有表現(xiàn)力。

　　亮點4：正確使用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，如seeing the lines of trees等，句式靈活。
延伸補充：

　　《Green Action in Our Class》優(yōu)秀范文一

　　On April 12th, our class went to plant trees in suburban area. It was a sunny day and temperature was moderate. The place we were heading to weren't far from our school, and because of environmental protection, we all rode bikes and it took us approximately an hour to reach our destination. We cooperated with each other to plant the trees. After we finished our planting, we built up a sign that has some words, "protect trees", on it. After we finished, we asked a local person to take a photo of us. We were so joyful and delighted that we got this great opportunity to protect environment ourselves. Thanks for the communist party that offered us the chance to experience the feeling of nature

　　《Green Action in Our Class》

　　Our class decided to plant trees on suburbs on April 12th. It was a sunny day,and my classmates and I rode bikes to the suburbs. On our way, we laughed and sang songs happily. On arriving there, we dug holes and planted trees into them before we watered them. In order to remind people to look after them well, we set up a sign which read "Please Protect the Trees." After having finished our work, we took a photo together as a memorial. We acquire something more than knowledge and satisfaction_it's the awareness of our responsibility. What an enjoyable and meaningful day!