在一篇字?jǐn)?shù)有限的英語作文里，我們還要注意盡量不把一個單詞拆開移行。萬一要移行，則必須以音節(jié)為單位進(jìn)行，如revolution這個詞，依照音節(jié)移行的原則可以按re-，revo-, revolu-這幾種方法移行。今天學(xué)習(xí)啦小編要與大家分享的是：5篇高考英語滿分作文范文相關(guān)名師點(diǎn)評。具體內(nèi)容如下，希望能夠幫助到大家!

　　【高考英語滿分作文試題回放】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為?？⒄Z園地寫一篇題為“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周你們班從準(zhǔn)備春游到春游結(jié)束的完整過程。

　　注意： 詞數(shù)不少于60.

　　提示詞： 游樂園amusement park 垃圾箱bin

　　Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

　　The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

　　We were tired but happy.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評】

　　本情景作文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.討論;2.爬山;3.檢拾別人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。本文覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。其中，寫作主題突出，詳略得當(dāng)，應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，而且有效的使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文機(jī)構(gòu)緊湊。本文敘述清楚，描寫細(xì)致，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用了很多富有表現(xiàn)力的詞和句型，例如：“set off early”，“enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view”, ”were shocked to see litter here and there “等，將活動的情形很形象地描述了出來。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1 set off 出發(fā)2. litter n.廢棄物3.respectively adv.分別地

　　好句1.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view .

　　在爬山時，我們享受著溫暖的陽光和美麗的風(fēng)景。

　　1. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.

　　然而，當(dāng)我們登上山頂，被眼前的一幕驚呆了：瓶子和香蕉皮這樣的廢棄物到處都是。

　　評析：細(xì)節(jié)描寫，生動形象。“shock”一詞也用得生動傳神。

　　【高考英語滿分作文試題回放】

　　一家賓館新開業(yè)，為吸引外國賓客，希望在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行宣傳。請你用英語為其 寫一篇文字介紹。主要內(nèi)容包括：

　　1.地點(diǎn)：距白山入口處500米;

　　2.房間及價格：單人間(共20間)，100元/天;雙人間(共15間)，150元/天;熱水淋浴;

　　3.餐飲：餐廳(中、西餐)，咖啡廳(茶、咖啡);

　　4.游泳池：全天免費(fèi)開放;

　　5.歡迎預(yù)定。

　　注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

　　Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

　　500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

　　Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評】

　　本文開門見山，首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的使用也很正確?？偟貋碚f，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞　1. provide v.提供 2. convenience n.便利

　　好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

　　very enjoyable.所有這些服務(wù)都會給你帶來便利，并且非常的愉快。

　　評析：bring great convenience，帶來便利。

　　【高考英語滿分作文試題回放】假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動物園工作人員寫一封信：

　　1、 自我介紹; 2、祝賀蘇琳生日; 3、感謝工作人員; 4、索取蘇琳三歲生日照。

　　注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右;2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3、開頭語已為你寫好。

　　例文：

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　Greetings from China!

　　I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

　　By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　【名師點(diǎn)評】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

　　1.自我介紹;2.信息來源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結(jié)尾。

　　這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達(dá)到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準(zhǔn)確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運(yùn)用合理，結(jié)合了簡單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂的2.express v.表達(dá) 3.give birth to v.產(chǎn)生，生育

　　好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

　　我祝福它生日快樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達(dá)我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。

　　【高考英語滿分作文試題回放】

假設(shè)你是卜曼宜，你購買了一部某外國公司生產(chǎn)的手機(jī)，因有質(zhì)量問題，要求該公司更換。請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文寫一封電子郵件。

　　要點(diǎn)：1. 問題：手機(jī)不響鈴，不能發(fā)短信;該產(chǎn)品已售完，無法更換;型號新，無配件，無法維修。2. 要求：公司應(yīng)盡快予以更換。

　　注意：1. 詞數(shù)為100左右;

　　2. 參考詞匯：配件—— spare part;

　　3. 電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好(不計(jì)入你所寫詞數(shù));

　　4.已給出的電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾不得抄入答題卡。

　　Dear Sir，

　　I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

　　Thank you for your consideration.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Bu Manyi

　　【名師點(diǎn)評】

　　本文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全，語言豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，如頭兩句說明了購買手機(jī)后發(fā)現(xiàn)故障的情況，中間部分說明了無法維修而必須讓公司更換手機(jī)的原委，最后明確提出自己的要求，明白流暢，將題目所提出的要點(diǎn)全部表達(dá)清楚，較好的完成了任務(wù)。全文以一般過去時為基調(diào)，結(jié)合主動語態(tài)與被動語態(tài)，并使用了so, but, therefore 等連接詞，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整嚴(yán)密。固定短語，如be sold out ,at least, had no choice but to go, to my disappointment, on hearing that 等的使用，使文章的語言顯得地道而精煉。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1. disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.絕望的 3. consideration n.體諒

　　好句To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.

　　令我失望的是，他說因?yàn)樵谥袊切驴钍謾C(jī)，所以沒有配件來修理。

　　評析：復(fù)雜句的組織; to my disappointment, 常用短語。

　　【高考英語滿分作文試題回放】鼠標(biāo)是計(jì)算機(jī)時代最佳的人機(jī)交互工具之一。它極大地方便了人們的計(jì)算機(jī)操作。但是，過分依賴鼠標(biāo)的習(xí)慣也會帶來一些不利影響。請你以鼠標(biāo)為切入點(diǎn)，根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇短文。

　　鼠標(biāo)的必要性對多數(shù)人來說，操作計(jì)算機(jī)，上網(wǎng)沖浪……

　　鼠標(biāo)的便捷性點(diǎn)擊、移動、插入、拷貝、刪除……編輯文本，搜索信息……

　　收發(fā)郵件，選購商品……

　　點(diǎn)播音樂，下載電影……

　　如果過分依賴鼠標(biāo)…… (請考生結(jié)合自身感受，列舉兩到三點(diǎn))

　　注意：

　　1.對所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

　　2.詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

　　3.作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

　　The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.

　　For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.

　　A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評】

　　本文為提綱式說明文體裁，所選內(nèi)容與我們生活相關(guān)，考生只要把所給要點(diǎn)逐條陳述，適度發(fā)揮，不要逐條翻譯即可。文章說理清楚，語言流暢，句式表達(dá)多樣，用詞恰當(dāng)、準(zhǔn)確。不失為一篇滿分作文

　　【高考英語滿分作文試題回放】

2007年4月29日上午10點(diǎn)到11點(diǎn)，全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育活動在各地大中小學(xué)校同時進(jìn)行，江蘇省1，100萬學(xué)生積極參與了這項(xiàng)活動。

　　教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：

　　每天鍛煉一小時

　　健康工作五十年

　　幸福生活一輩子

　　請你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動的有關(guān)情況，并就高三學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶袄碛伞?/p>

　　注意：

　　1、發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

　　2、詞數(shù)：120左右。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　3、參考詞匯：陽光體育活動——a national student sports program;

　　教育部——the Ministry of Education

　　Good afternoon, everyone,

　　The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

　　The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

　　In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!

　　Thank you!

　　【名師點(diǎn)評】

　　本文的結(jié)構(gòu)十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準(zhǔn)確。本文分為三段，前兩段敘述，后一段發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，典型的作文結(jié)構(gòu)。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。復(fù)雜的句式是本文的特點(diǎn)之一。

　　積累卡片

　　好詞1.wage v.發(fā)動2.aim v.瞄準(zhǔn)3. advocate v.提倡

　　好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.

　　教育部提倡我們每天做一個小時的運(yùn)動，能夠健康地活50年。

　　評析：advocate，其后接虛擬語氣，可以省略情態(tài)動詞。

　　2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.

　　如果我們不進(jìn)行運(yùn)動，我們的學(xué)習(xí)成績就不會很好。

　　評析：虛擬語氣。