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　　今天學習啦小編將與大家分享：小考滿分作文：我的文具盒，具體內(nèi)容如下，僅供大家參考閱讀，更多精彩知識內(nèi)容盡在學習啦，大家一起來學習吧!

　　我的文具盒

　　的文具盒是一年前媽媽給我買的，雖然它已經(jīng)“老”了，但我還是十分珍惜它。

　　我的文具盒是用鐵皮做成的。拿在手里，首先映入眼簾的是上面的畫。左邊有一個趴在地上的大臉花貓，它臉上呈現(xiàn)出一種痛苦的表情，好像是因為剛剛重重地跌倒過的緣故吧。右邊有好幾排英文字母， 上面寫的好像是這只貓的自述。雖然不能完全看懂，但是我也能翻譯幾句話。文具盒全身綠色，但因時間長生了銹和我在上面貼了貼畫的緣故，使它變得與一點兒雜亂了。

　　打開蓋子，里面裝滿了學習用品。文具盒分為上、中、下三層。上面一層“睡著”兩支水筆，一支是藍的，一支是黑的。它們“躺”在一把綠色的鐵質(zhì)直尺上，一點兒聲音都沒有，好像正在酣睡。中層里“橫”著一個藍色的橡皮，放著兩支短得快不能使用的鉛筆和一支閃亮的紅色水筆。下層因為空間小，就在里面“藏”著一些筆芯。

　　文具盒雖然是用來供我學習用的，但是這個龐大的盒下，還“躲”著四個小輪子，只要將文具盒輕輕一推，它就能平穩(wěn)地向前駛?cè)?。因為它比較長，再加上下面有“乘客”們便陸續(xù)下車，幫助我學習。

　　我的文具盒給我?guī)砹藲g樂，我愛我的文具盒。

　　點評：

　　1.文章通過對文具盒的詳盡描寫，體現(xiàn)出小作者對它的喜愛之情。文章按照由外而內(nèi)、由上至下的順序，將文具盒的外表圖畫、內(nèi)部構(gòu)造及放置的物品描述得具體全面。內(nèi)容豐富，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)完整。

　　2.語言運用精妙，用豐富的詞語來表現(xiàn)文具盒內(nèi)物品的擺放狀態(tài)，如“睡著”、“橫”、“藏”......對小輪子的描寫采用了“躲”字，既生動又準確。

　　3.文章的描寫生動形象，比喻貼切。語言自然流暢，敘述有條不紊，整體感強。

　　英文翻譯

　　My Cases

　　The stationery is my mother bought me a year ago, although it has "old", but I still cherish it.

　　My stationery is made with iron. In his hand, the first thing that catches the eye is the top draw. Left lying on the floor there is a large cat face, it presents a face expression of pain, it seems to be because just fall too heavily because of it. On the right there are several rows of letters, written above seems to be the cat readme. Although we can not fully understand, but I can translate a few words. Stationery green body, but time longevity rusty and I have posted above the sticker's sake, it becomes a little messy.

　　Open the lid, filled with school supplies. Stationery divided into upper, middle and lower layers. Layer above the "sleeping" two pens, one is blue, one is black. They "lie" on a green iron ruler, a little voice did not, like being asleep. Middle in "horizontal" with a blue rubber, stood a shiny red pencil and pen two short fast can not be used. Lower because of the small space, on the inside, "hiding" some refills.

　　Although the stationery is used for me to learn to use, but in this huge box, and "hide" the four small wheels, as long as the stationery little push, it can smoothly drove forward. Because it is relatively long, plus the below "passengers" who will have to get off and help me learn.

　　My Cases brought me joy, I love my stationery.

　　Reviews:

　　1. Through an exhaustive description of stationery, reflecting its small author's affection. Articles from outside to inside in accordance with the order from top to bottom, and the picture looks stationery, internal structure and placement of objects is described as a specific and comprehensive. Content-rich, structured, structural integrity.

　　2. exquisite use of language, with a wealth of words to express stationery items placed within the state, such as "asleep", "horizontal", "Tibet" ...... on small wheels description using the "hide" word, both vivid and accurate.

　　3. vivid description of the article, apt analogy. Natural language fluency, methodical narrative, the overall sense.