作文的六要素一般是：時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，人物，事情的起因，經(jīng)過,結(jié)果。

　　今天小編要與大家分享的是：小升初滿分作文范文：故鄉(xiāng)，具體內(nèi)容如下，僅供閱讀參考。

　　故鄉(xiāng)

　　緬懷似水流年，轉(zhuǎn)眼間，我離開故鄉(xiāng)已有5年之久，但我卻時(shí)常思念著它，因?yàn)樗俏业母窃杏页砷L的地方，我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記它。

　　今日，我終于要回到了這里了。但心中卻有著一股莫名的苦澀，卻不知為何。大概是由于長時(shí)間沒回來了吧。

　　車輪滾滾，帶著濃濃的情，穿山越嶺，我回來了。倏而，我看見了那個(gè)熟悉的山頭。那不是故鄉(xiāng)的山頭嗎?是，是故鄉(xiāng)的山頭。我似乎有些激動(dòng)，不i我確乎有些激動(dòng)。在車拐彎的那一瞬間，我發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個(gè)白發(fā)蒼蒼的老人站在一旁焦急地等待著，她是誰?她是我的奶奶嗎?我躊躇了會(huì)兒，車近了，我也看清楚了，是我的奶奶i車停穩(wěn)了，我奔下車，和奶奶緊緊地?fù)肀г谝黄?，那是的心情真是無以言表……

　　經(jīng)過幾分中的步行，終于到家了，但故鄉(xiāng)的荒涼卻讓我心酸：低矮的房子，貧瘠的土地，還有一群老頑固……總之，故鄉(xiāng)的現(xiàn)況令我很失望。

　　故鄉(xiāng)的前景時(shí)時(shí)困擾著我，我不知到我能為故鄉(xiāng)做些什么?我長大后又能為家鄉(xiāng)做什么?……

　　沉積的傷痛一個(gè)凜冽的冬天，您，我的爺爺，帶著滿身的傷痛離開人世。臨終時(shí)，你的臉上現(xiàn)出難以忍受的痛苦，是那樣無助，那樣令人感到憐憫……

　　你雷同一輛載滿蒼桑歲月的三輪車，在最后一次遠(yuǎn)航后，悄然離我而去了。落日的余輝照著你那安詳?shù)拿纨嫼鸵徽克{(lán)的海水，在廣翰無邊的海面上漫無目的地飄流著，直至你被大自然所風(fēng)化，從此消泯殆盡。

　　曾幾何時(shí)，你在那狹小的院落里教會(huì)了我1+1等于2的時(shí)候，你是多么開懷，多么欣慰啊，當(dāng)我小心翼翼地點(diǎn)燃你那大煙時(shí)，你又多么驕傲啊。

　　時(shí)光如流水一般逝去，不管我怎樣追趕，都無濟(jì)于事。我感到局促與茫然，甚至還感到彷徨，感到恐懼，心中也涌上一股莫名的悲傷。我拼盡全身力氣，使勁追溯著我倆那如詩的光陰，可我還是淡忘了，最終被那精彩的年華深深的埋沒了，就連那昔日我記得請(qǐng)清楚楚的臉龐，也在我的腦海中隨風(fēng)而逝了，你，仿佛從我的人生中愴然離去了，永遠(yuǎn)，永遠(yuǎn)。

　　偶然的一日，我來到你永眠的地方，在這里，我仰望青天，俯瞰大地，欲歌無詞，欲哭無淚，心中流淌著思念的折磨……

　　我來到那狹小的院落，努力地尋覓著殘留在這里的記憶。驀地，我發(fā)現(xiàn)了那個(gè)大煙桿兒，它靜靜的佇立在那個(gè)角落，我似乎看到我偎依在您的身旁，您給我講著動(dòng)聽的故事……

　　英文翻譯

　　Home

　　Recall Homecoming blink of an eye, I left home has been five years, but I always miss it, because it is my roots, where I grew up is the birth, I will never forget it.

　　Today, I'm finally back here. But the heart has an inexplicable bitterness, but I do not know why. Probably due to the long time it did not come back to the bar.

　　Wheels rolling, with a deep sense of love, through the mountains, I'm back. Shuer, I saw the familiar hills. That is not the home of the hills it? Yes, yes hometown hill. I seem a little excited, I do not i indeed some excitement. Turning moment in the car, I found a very old man stood anxiously waiting, who is she? She is my grandmother do? I hesitated for a moment, the car closer, I also see , I am the grandmother i parked car, and I ran off, and grandmother hugged each other tightly, and that is the mood is really beyond words ......

　　After a bit of walking, finally home, but home made me sad desolation: low house, barren land, a group of old fogy ...... In short, the status of home makes me very disappointed.

　　Prospects hometown always haunt me, I do not know that I can do something for the home? I can grow up to do for the home? ......

　　Deposition of pain a cold winter, you, my grandfather, with immense pain died. When dying, your face emerged unbearable suffering, is so helpless, so people feel pity ......

　　You duplicate a tricycle loaded with Cangsang years, after the last voyage, quietly away from me. Sunsets according to your face and a serene blue waters, in the broad Han boundless sea aimlessly drifting forward until you weathered by nature, since consumer obliterate completely.

　　Once upon a time, your church in a small courtyard that I 1 + 1 equals 2, when, how much you laugh, how pleased ah, when I carefully ignite you that opium, you and how proud ah.

　　Time like water gone, no matter how I catch up, to no avail. I felt cramped with a loss, and even feel anxious, fear, heart also took an inexplicable sadness. I fight every body strength, straining poetic retrospective of us that time, but I still forget, and eventually that wonderful Love deeply buried, even that old I remember clearly Chu please face, but also I mind blowing in the wind, and you, as if my life sad departed, never, never.

　　Occasional day, I came to a place you never sleep in here, I look up to the sky, overlooking the earth, I want the song without words, tears, hearts flowing tortured thoughts ......

　　I came to the small courtyard, trying to find the remains in the memories here. Then, abruptly, I found that opium stalks, it quietly standing in the corner, I seem to see me nestling in your side, you told me a good story ......