高考英語滿分作文帶翻譯

　　【作文題目】假如你是李夏。你看到關(guān)國留學(xué)生Sharon 在網(wǎng)上發(fā)貼，.希望有人能幫助她提高普通話(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英語作為回報(bào)。請根據(jù)以下提示用英語給她寫一封電子郵件。

　　1.表達(dá)給她提供幫助的意愿;

　　2.說明你能勝任輔導(dǎo)的理由;

　　3.給出講好普通話的兩點(diǎn)建議;

　　4.提出你學(xué)習(xí)英語的具體需求。

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數(shù)120左右，開頭語已為你寫好;

　　2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

　　3. 文中不得透漏個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

　　范文1：　Hi Sharon,

　　This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I feel honored to have the chance to help you with your Mandarin learning and I am very happy to have you as my English teacher. I'm good at speaking standard Mandarin. I've been a broadcaster in the school’s broadcasting station for years. When it comes to how to speak fluent Mandarin, I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first, which are quite different from the English ones. Another suggestion is to practice speaking. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”. However, my English is just OK and I have many problems with my study. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English well. I believe we both can make much progress with each others’ help.

　　Thank you!

　　Li Xia

　　譯文：

　　莎倫，你好：

　　我是李夏。我從你的帖子上看到你想提高普通話水平。我很榮幸有機(jī)會(huì)能幫你學(xué)習(xí)普通話，同時(shí)也很高興你能做我的英語老師。我能說一口流利且標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的普通話。我在學(xué)校廣播站擔(dān)任廣播員有好幾年了。當(dāng)談到怎樣能說一口流利的普通話，我建議你首先要學(xué)習(xí)一些發(fā)音規(guī)則，這些發(fā)音規(guī)則和英語發(fā)音規(guī)則完全不同。另一個(gè)建議就是口語練習(xí)。俗話說：“熟能生巧。”另外，我的英語水平很一般，在學(xué)習(xí)上也有很多問題。我真心希望你能給我一些關(guān)于如何學(xué)好英語的建議。我相信我們彼此在互相助之下，都能取得很大的進(jìn)步。

　　謝謝!

　　李夏

　　范文2：Hi Sharon,

　　This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am willing to help you with your Mandarin. As a native Chinese speaker, I can speak Chinese clearly and fluently, and my teachers think highly of my spoken Chinese. I have taught some foreigners Mandarin, which makes me have much experience in teaching.

　　As for speaking Mandarin, it’s better to pay much attention to the pronunciation. Besides, you must take notice of the handwriting. And you also should keep it in mind that comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way to improve your study.

　　In return l hope you can help me with my spoken English. When I speak English, I often feel a little nervous. Can you give me some advice on how to overcome that?

　　Looking forward lo hearing from you.

　　Li Xia

　　譯文：

　　莎倫，你好：

　　我是李夏。我從你的帖子上看到你想提高普通話水平。我愿意幫助你的普通話。作為一個(gè)中國人，我可以清楚、流利地講中文。我的老師們對我的中文口語有著高度的評價(jià)。我教過一些外國人的普通話，這讓我在教學(xué)上有很多的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。

　　至于說普通話，最好多注意發(fā)音。此外，你還必須注意書寫。而且你也應(yīng)該記住，與你的同學(xué)經(jīng)常交換意見是一個(gè)改善你學(xué)習(xí)的好方法。

　　作為回報(bào)，我希望你能幫助我的英語口語。當(dāng)我說英語的時(shí)候，我經(jīng)常感到有點(diǎn)緊張。你能給我一些建議來克服這個(gè)問題嗎?

　　期待收到你的來信。

　　李夏

　　范文3：

　　Hi Sharon,

　　This isLi Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it. I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition, I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.

　　Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well, you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese, see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.

　　In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.

　　Hope for you early reply!

　　Yours Sincerely

　　Li Xia

　　譯文：

　　莎倫，你好：

　　我是李夏。我從你的帖子上看到你想提高普通話水平。我對此很感興趣。我認(rèn)為我適合幫助你。作為一名學(xué)生，我已學(xué)習(xí)普通話多年。此外，我是中國人，這意味著我在日常生活中必需用普通話與他人溝通。所以我很有信心我可以幫助你學(xué)習(xí)普通話。

　　學(xué)習(xí)普通話需要時(shí)間，所以如果你想學(xué)好它，你應(yīng)該每天花很多時(shí)間練習(xí)普通話。俗話說，熟能生巧。除此之外，你也可以讀一些中文書，看一些中文的電影和聽一些中文廣播節(jié)目。對于語言學(xué)習(xí)來說，說和聽非常重要。通過說和聽，你一定會(huì)取得很大的進(jìn)步。

　　在你的帖子中，你說你可以教英語作為回報(bào)。這正是我想要的。我渴望提高我的英語。所以，如果你允許我?guī)椭銓W(xué)習(xí)普通話，你也可以幫助我提高我的英語。我們可以每天晚上通過視頻聊天保持聯(lián)系，半個(gè)小時(shí)講英語和半小時(shí)說中文，這樣我們可以提高我們的口語。

　　希望早日收到你的回復(fù)!

　　此致

　　李夏